Book: Perfect Ruin by Lauren DeStefano

Published October 2013 by Simon & Schuster|253 pages

Where I Got It: I own the e-book

Series: The Interment Chronicles #1

Genre: YA Dystopia

On the floating city of Internment,you can be anything you dream – a novelist or a singer, a florist or a factory worker… Your life is yours to embrace or to squander. There’s only one rule: you don’t approach THE EDGE. If you do, it’s already over.

Morgan Stockhour knows getting too close to the edge of Internment, the floating city and her home, can lead to madness. Even though her older brother, Lex, was a Jumper, Morgan vows never to end up like him. There’s too much for her on Internment: her parents, best friend Pen, and her betrothed, Basil. Her life is ordinary and safe, even if she sometimes does wonder about the ground and why it’s forbidden.

Then a murder, the first in a generation, rocks the city. With whispers swirling and fear on the wind, Morgan can no longer stop herself from investigating, especially once she meets Judas. Betrothed to the victim, Judas is being blamed for the murder, but Morgan is convinced of his innocence. Secrets lay at the heart of Internment, but nothing can prepare Morgan for what she will find—or whom she will lose.

I liked Perfect Ruin!  It’s a really interesting concept, a floating city about earth.  It’s definitely a world where the ground is forbidden, and it makes you wonder why they’re floating above earth, why the ground is forbidden, and what’s really going on in this society.

It was hard to get into at first, but by the end, I was really curious about the ground and the Princess and their technology and medicine.  It was hard to get through at first, because I was really bored, but it does get more interesting as the book goes on.  It is a shame, though, because some of the things that happen in the beginning had the potential to grab my attention, and it just didn’t do that.

The concept of Jumpers was really weird at first, and it didn’t make a lot of sense, but it does get explained throughout the book.  Something I’m wondering, though, is how much sense the world is going to make by the end of the series.  I did lose interest in her Chemical Garden trilogy by the time I got around to the last book, and there were things about that last book that didn’t make sense.  It makes me wonder if that’s how this series will be, which makes me hesitant to keep reading, even though I really want to keep going.

Morgan fell really flat, as did a lot of the characters, and that might be why I had a hard time getting into it.  They didn’t really stand out, and Morgan didn’t really have a personality, so it was hard to get completely invested in her story, and even when a certain event happened, it was hard to feel or care about how it affected Morgan.  It’s not good when I can remember more about the main character’s brother and her best friend than the actual main character.  At least they had some personality and depth to them.  Maybe that will change in the following books, but in this one, Morgan made no impression on me whatsoever.

Still, I am interested in continuing the series at some point in the future, though I won’t be picking up the second book anytime soon.

3 stars.  I liked it, because I thought the floating city to be pretty different, and I feel like there’s a really interesting world there. I’ll definitely be picking up the next book at some point, even though it probably won’t be soon.

Book: For Always by Danielle Sibarium

Published January 2012 by KFR Communications|162 pages

Where I Got It: I own the e-book

Series: None

Genre: YA Contemporary

You never really get over your first love. Such is the case for fourteen-year-old Stephanie Barrano, self-proclaimed misfit and death magnet. A freshman in high school, Stephanie is befriended by Jordan Brewer, a hot, in-demand senior, who pulls her from the outer circle of obscurity into the realm of acceptance. Jordan quickly works his way into Stephanie’s heart. He’s her everything. And the only person she trusts with the truth about her father’s death. But he won’t act on the strong feelings he has for her. Stephanie vows to wait for him, knowing in time she’ll win his heart.

Two months before her eighteenth birthday, Jordan serves as an impromptu prom date. After sharing a magical evening, Jordan leaves Stephanie with the promise of a future together. Then tragedy strikes. Jordan not only shuts Stephanie out, he also blames her for what happened. Feeling broken and beaten, will she try one last time to get through to Jordan or will she lose him forever?

I didn’t like For Always.  Really, I should have guessed that it wouldn’t be my thing, but it also seemed like it would be really cute and sweet, and instead, the romance drove me completely bonkers.

So, it felt like things were very one-sided- I got the impression that Stephanie was lot more into Jordan, and that he didn’t reciprocate.  I also got the impression he knew that she was into him, and that he strung her along, knowing she was super-into him.  I didn’t understand why she was so into him, and I really wish we saw more of them together, because Stephanie liking him made no sense to me.

Also, this was pretty tame, even by YA standards.  Granted, he refused to do anything with her, which might be why, but it made me feel like this was the YA version of Christian/Inspirational romance.  It was boring, and I felt like there was nothing between them.  It was pretty underwhelming, and it made me wish there were some sort of spark or something between them.  The pace was a little too slow, especially since I felt like there was really nothing between Stephanie and Jordan.  Maybe it was hard to get into because they don’t kiss for the first time until the book is almost over.  And then, out of the blue, he’s telling her mom that he wants to marry her one day.  It really came out of nowhere, and given that he didn’t seem interested in her for most of the book, it seemed out of place that he’d go from showing no interesting to marriage.

Stephanie’s best friend was also really confusing.  Sometimes, she seemed like an awesome friend, but there were other times where she seemed really shallow and self-absorbed.  Her mom barely made an appearance, and when we did see her mom, she seemed to freak out about stuff for no apparent reason.

And the formatting got really frustrating- there was a gap between freshman year Stephanie and senior year Stephanie, and there were quite a few blank pages in the gap.  Plus, the chapters were formatted a little weird, and it broke up the flow for me.

Other than that, I don’t have anything else I want to see.  I’m trying to come up with something else, but I can’t, so…

1 star.  I couldn’t get into it, and the romance didn’t work for me at all.

Book: Tangled by Carolyn Mackler

Published December 2009 by HarperTeen|308 pages

Where I Got It: I borrowed the hardcover from the library

Series: None

Genre: YA Contemporary

Paradise wasn’t supposed to suck.  

Not the state of being, but a resort in the Caribbean.

Jena, Dakota, Skye, and Owen are all there for different reasons, but at Paradise their lives become tangled together in ways none of them can predict. Paradise will change them all.

It will change Jena, whose first brush with romance takes her that much closer to having a life, and not just reading about those infinitely cooler and more exciting.

It will change Dakota, who needs the devastating truth about his past to make him realize that he doesn’t have to be a jerk just because people think he’s one.

It will change Skye, a heartbreakingly beautiful actress, who must come to terms with the fact that for once she has to stop playing a role or face the consequences.

And it will change Owen, who has never risked anything before and who will take the leap from his online life to a real one all because of a girl he met at Paradise…

From confused to confident and back again, one thing’s certain: Four months after it all begins, none of them will ever be the same.

I thought Tangled was okay!  It had a lot of potential to be really cute, but it wasn’t as cute or fun as I thought it would be.

I think a large part of it is how the story is told.  We get 4 teens, and they each get a section- each teen gets a month or so, before we move on to the next character.  The four stories don’t intersect as much as I though they would, and as far as the ending goes, I really expected all four of them to come together, and for all four stories to come together in some really interesting, big way.  And it didn’t, and I was disappointed with that, because what I thought was going to happen didn’t actually happen.  Not that I had something in mind, because I didn’t, but I was still expecting something to tie all of them together at the end.

I also thought there would be more time at Paradise, but instead we see what life is like for all of them after that trip.  Other than both girls meeting Dakota, and Jena finding a note that Skye left behind that sets up something in Skye’s section, I didn’t really get the point behind going to Paradise.  It almost didn’t matter that they all went, except it sort of does, and not in a way that adds much of anything to the story.

With the four characters getting their own story over the course of four months, you get some insight into each character, but it also broke up the flow of the story, and it made the book seem like four separate stories that randomly connect instead of one cohesive story.  It just made it hard to get into the book and even harder to get invested in any one character, especially since you basically get one character’s story and then you’re pretty much done with them because you’re not really going to see them again.

2 stars.  It was okay, and I don’t really have strong enough feelings about it to care one way or another.

Book: Bitter Melon by Cara Chow

Published December 2010 by EgmontUSA|215 pages

Where I Got It: I own the e-book

Series: None

Genre: YA Contemporary

Frances, a Chinese-American student at an academically competitive school in San Francisco, has always had it drilled into her to be obedient to her mother and to be a straight-A student so that she can go to med school.  But is being a doctor what she wants?  It has never even occurred to Frances to question her own feelings and desires until she accidentally winds up in speech class and finds herself with a hidden talent.  Does she dare to challenge the mother who has sacrificed everything for her?  Set in the 1980’s.

I think I liked Bitter Melon, but I’m also not sure how I feel about some of the things that happened in the book.  I felt like Frances and Derek had no chemistry, and her mom…I have such mixed feelings about her mom.

I think parental pressure is something we can all relate to in varying degrees.  Her mom did seem really extreme and slightly abusive.  On the one hand, I can picture parents acting the way her mom does, but at the same time, I really felt felt like the mom was an extreme take on the strict Asian parent stereotype.  I don’t think how how her mom acted is limited to any one group, but at the same time…I didn’t really like that her mom seemed like such an extreme stereotype.  I can’t even begin to imagine what it’s like to have the mother she does, and to have a life planned out for her…a life that she doesn’t want for herself, or to question if that’s the best life for her.

I wanted so much to feel for Frances, but I found that I didn’t particularly care for her or what happened to her.  She seemed really dense sometimes, and I didn’t really get the impression that speech was a hidden talent for her.  And I don’t like how she handled things at the end of the book at all. Granted, I don’t know if there was a better way, or what Frances could have done, but to a certain extent, I felt like she stooped to her mother’s level. Yes, her mother said and did some horrible things, but she still didn’t completely deserve what Frances did.  France getting her revenge, and embarrassing her mom seemed like such a stereotype of someone getting back at the person who treated them horribly.  I also wish that the book ended with more of a resolution between Frances and her mom, because things were a little too unresolved for my liking.

As for Frances and Derek, I really thought that they had no chemistry.  It seemed like he was supposed to be the reason why she finally stood up to her mom- at the very least, a major reason why.  Personally, I have no problem with that, but it could have had the potential to make the book a little bit lighter, but it didn’t- it just added conflict.  As for Frances making changes, and questioning things, I thought that her speech class and the speech tournaments could have done that in a much better way.

Except for the random pop culture references, I forgot that the book was even set in the 1980’s.  Okay, there’s no internet or cell phones, but even then, it seemed like the book could have been set a couple of decades later.  It could have made the book a lot more stifling, but it didn’t really add anything to the book.

2 stars.  It was okay, and I had a hard time relating to Frances and even caring about what happened to her was hard.